Thread:Lord Hyōga/@comment-5057168-20140512134418/@comment-4576906-20140512234008

This one is well-written and actually, I think, more to the point than the other. It is concise and very easy to read. While I might concede that there is a touch more emphasis on Sesshomaru than Rin, both sides are needed, so making it lean more towards Rin's POV would be equally incorrect.