Thread:Lord Hyōga/@comment-185.73.38.48-20160509174459/@comment-185.73.38.51-20160512043250

You must not be a native speaker of English. That was clear besides a period was missing.

Also it says " He grew up with his sister, grandfather, mother, and cat as a family." should be "a cat" or something. That sounds awkward.

In English, the cat in this sentence needs an article. Article  is "a/an" or  "the"

" He grew up with his sister, grandfather, mother, and a cat as family." sounds better

or " He grew up with his sister, grandfather, mother, and buyo the cat as family."